SaDness
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SADDNESS
Saddness is like a deep sea,
Waves breaking inside me.
Solid perfuse tears I weep
No hands brushes them away
And,
Deep they seep.
I am alone,
With a lovely soul in my way
Over my fate I’ve no say
Darkness a veil upon my success
As it takes all my devotions away.
In Pauls I’m friendly,
While I’m desolate and vacantly alone.
My feelings die away
My emotions sedated,
I think,
I ponder
If God made us all the same,
then why is so unloved my Name??
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Oh and I love the picture!!! It's captivating...makes you take a second glance and feel the emotions without hearing any words...
Thanks thanglynn07 for your words, I really love to write poetry and read it because it takes to depth of things.. you also have good taste in such regard
Ya this picture is also Fine, I got it after hard time spent in searching the best image i could find to match my words
You're very welcome! Just giving credit where it deserves! Job well done!
Thanks Again
Thanks Again
Good Poem,
Good story below to make remove sadness and not to be too happy. Cheers.
Thanks I read it
Awesome poem. Very deep. you can really feel it!
Thanks kebennett1
Tender is the human heart. Very nice poetry. I like this.
Oh thank U for liking it !!
very sad poem, I completely understand it. Good work.
Thank U !!
.... and I hope you see the Sun shine soon.
What a beautiful but, sad poem.
Regards.
Thank u Lady_E for liking
Sweetest pleasure is perhaps pain .. thanks for such a wonderful hub
:-) Feelings are always to be expressed
:-) Feelings are always to be expressed
thanglynn07 2 years ago
Omg! I love this poem! It's beautifully...sad...Definitely feel the pain in your words. Thank you for such beautiful work! I'm very drawn to sadness...not because I enjoy it...well, I am fascinated on how others express our unwanted friend, "sadness". Thank you...